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 The Cherry Creek Prophecies.. Eleven
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Unexpected Truth.



Somehow it was beginning to seem likely to Daniel Vickers, that he had been misinterpreting the clues that he was being left by Jennifer Watson in his dreams. He could just feel it now by the way Tyler Malloy reacted to the way Leonard Davis said something to the effect of “I cleaned up your last mess and now-” and the way Tyler seemed genuinely surprised to see him holding the pistol. Even now the two men are arguing , Tyler Malloy slowly moving the attention away from Daniel Vickers who is recording the entire exchange on his video cell phone. He can hear the two men arguing now as he struggles to piece the whole puzzle together in his mind,
“there’s no time for that” he thinks to himself as he concentrates on Tyler Malloy who is now yelling at Sheriff Leonard Davis.
“Len! For the love of God what have you done??”
He has the gun trained on Tyler Malloy.
“You had all of those girls Ty, they all loved you!! But Jennifer was different, she wanted me, this one wanted me, not you!”
“Len.. Man your sick, I never did anything with those girls! You thought I was having sex with them? For the love of God man I have two daughters that age! Len.. Put the gun down. We can get you some help. Just stop this now!”
Now it was Daniel Vickers turn to be confused. Everything was telling him that Tyler Malloy was his man. And yet now here it was Leonard Davis that was all but confessing to the act. He glanced from the corner of his eye at Daniel and then back at the gun, Tyler slowly inching forward while Leonard Davis seemed to be rambling on about how he’d actually killed Jennifer and why. His eye’s were glazed over as he seemed to be recalling some distant memory.
“This was our special place.. Where we would come to be alone. And then we came out here that last time and she told me that she had written about our entire relationship in that book. I got angry.. I pulled out the gun.. Just to scare her into giving me the book. It went off by accident.. She.. Died right there..”
Tyler Malloy steps forward, startled, Leonard Davis jerks on the hand gun and it fires into his abdomen, he falls almost instantly. Daniel Vickers seizes the opportunity to tackle Leonard Davis knocking the gun loose from his hand and as the two struggle in the dirt, sounds of sirens in the distance begin to echo through the tree’s at Cherry Creek. Daniel begins to lose his footing and slowly Leonard Davis begins to get the advantage , he has a large thick part of a tree branch and is holding it over his head, and is about to lower it onto Daniel Vickers skull, but Tyler Malloy is still fully conscious and has recovered the pistol and shoots Sheriff Leonard Davis in the chest. He stumbles backwards, a cold vacant look crosses over his face, he falls to the earth, he is dead before his body touches the ground. Daniel Vickers tries to help him to his feet but now Tyler Malloy is almost unconscious. He hears footfalls coming towards them and soon Sharon Milner’s voice calls out to him. Her and Angela Watson have brought the Freemont county Sheriff’s department with them.

Leonard's Ruse.



As Tyler Malloy lies in his hospital bed he listens intently as Daniel Vickers relates to him the entire contents of his dreams.
“I never had an affair with any of the girls.” Tyler tells him. “ Jennifer came to me one day after soccer practice, she was distraught. Troubled.. but she wouldn’t say why. I took her home and dropped her off. Angela wasn’t there but I told her about it later. I told Leonard too. And the next day Jen came up missing. I went looking for her with a few of the other deputies, we tried Mr. Vickers, we really did, Jen was a good girl , she didn’t deserve that. God if I would have even suspected Leonard.”
Daniel Vickers studies him.
“But why the white hats? Why did your truck end up in my dreams? And the Strange visits to Angela Watson’s house? And how did you end up at Cherry Creek yesterday? Do you see my problem with this deputy? There’s a lot of questions that don’t seem to fit.”
Tyler Malloy lay’s his head back down on the pillow, his eyes never leaving Daniel Vickers.
“ Tell Me something Mr. Vickers. I’m curious.”
Daniel nods.
“Did you ever see ME driving the truck in your dreams?”
“No. come to think of it I never did see the drivers face, just his hands coming out of the shadows.”
“The truck wasn’t always mine Mr. Vickers. I bought it from Leonard last year. Hell it ran good, it was supposed to be a work truck, that’s why I bought the damn thing. I never dreamed that Leonard used it for-”
He stops in mid sentence.
“I only went to Angela’s to let her know that I hadn’t forgotten about her. I’d been in Jennifer’s room several times since she disappeared, it was like walking into a shrine. Nothing had changed or moved. Ever. It was heart breaking not knowing what happened. Yesterday when I was in my wife’s car, I saw you and Len heading towards Cherry Creek. Something strange happened. Hell no one would ever believe me in a million years if I told them.”
“Trust me Deputy. I know about strange, we are very well acquainted”
“I thought that I actually heard a voice telling me to follow you. And you may think I’m crazy but it sounded like Jennifer’s voice.”
“Jennifer told you to follow us?”
“I think so, and now I’m glad that I listened. Leonard was a sick man.”
Sharon Milner appears at Daniel Vickers side and leans over to whisper something in his ear, to which he nods.
“The Freemont County Sheriffs department dug up a body twenty minutes ago at Cherry Creek, of what appears to be a young female. They haven’t made a positive Identification yet, but I’d say given the circumstances that it is more than likely Jennifer Watson. I have to go Deputy, I’ll come and see how your doing later then?”
Tyler Malloy Nods. Daniel stops at the hospital door and looks down at him.
“By the way. We never covered the white hats did we?”
The deputy sadly stares at the ceiling.
“ We all wear white hats in the department Mr. Vickers. After all. We ARE supposed to be the good guys. Aren’t we?”
Daniel Vickers steps into the hallway. Sharon Milner is waiting there with Angela Watson. He sits down beside of them, trying to straighten it all out in his head at once. Staring straight ahead at the wall Sharon Milner gives Daniel Vickers other news.
“Danny?”
“Yeah?”
“Sweetie just before Angela and I left the house..”
He turns to her.
“What happened?”
“Annie Clark the librarian showed up. She found the book hidden in the library. We skimmed through it. It isn’t anything like what we were thinking.”
Angela Watson eyes were tearing up.
“It wasn’t Tyler, Daniel. After all of these years I find out that the one man I trusted was the one who was molesting my baby. He took her from me and I never suspected him.”
Daniel rises.
“I want to see the book.”

~Scratch A.B.T. Copyright © 2008.~

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Editors note:

I proof Read it Three Times and this is the only ending that I could come up with. although there will be a closing piece about the diary. I want to thank everyone who read and followed along with the Cherry Creek Prophecies and I hope the ending lives up to your expectations.Thanks for reading.

~Scratch.~
 
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by Scratch (PM , CC ) on Friday May 2, 2008 @ 1:04 PM




dang it! I gotta get back to work and I don't have time to read it now, crap!!!!! and see? ... if I hurry through it, I won't get to savor it, and really enjoy it .... grrrrrrr....

even though the suspense is killing me.

but like a reoccuring Daniel Vickers nightmare, I'll be back.
 
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by Bella (PM , CC ) on Friday May 2, 2008 @ 1:08 PM




Well worth the wait!...Although I was kind of Hoping They would find Jen alive...This ending made it some how more real...Thank You Scratch...Will be waiting for the final read, and the Next Story. Rhonda  
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by LilLadyReg (PM , CC ) on Friday May 2, 2008 @ 1:17 PM






This is such a great story, Scratch.
 
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by Kristin (PM , CC ) on Friday May 2, 2008 @ 2:17 PM




Well, I was leaning towards the deputy as the killer, except the Sheriff just seemed to be there too conveniently. I honestly couldn't decide who you had chosen as your killer. Nice job.

Sherry
 
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by Sherry'sCherries (PM , CC ) on Friday May 2, 2008 @ 3:40 PM




Enjoy the rest of your weekend Miss B.  
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by Scratch (PM , CC ) on Friday May 2, 2008 @ 6:31 PM




LilLadyReg:

Thank you glad you liked the read.
 
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by Scratch (PM , CC ) on Friday May 2, 2008 @ 6:32 PM




Thank you Kristin  
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by Scratch (PM , CC ) on Friday May 2, 2008 @ 6:32 PM




Sherry:

There were two or possibly three ways that I was thinking of taking it and this one won out. it was the only ending where all of the pieces seemed to fit. glad you liked it.
 
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by Scratch (PM , CC ) on Friday May 2, 2008 @ 6:34 PM




Works for me, Scratch! Some great writing here!

And just like a little kid--I WANT ANOTHER STORY!!
 
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by Fairweather Lewis (PM , CC ) on Saturday May 3, 2008 @ 2:38 PM




hey, I finally got around to the chilling ending! and the music was awesome, Scratchy. I see you left it open for perhaps a sequel?  
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by Bella (PM , CC ) on Saturday May 3, 2008 @ 2:44 PM




Hello Fairweather I have started of the epilogue of Cherry Creek and yes ma'am I already have an idea for another story or two for this blog, as well as another for the Bar and Grill blog. thanks for stopping by.  
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by Scratch (PM , CC ) on Saturday May 3, 2008 @ 2:50 PM




Miss B:

I still have the Epilogue to deal with but after that who knows?
 
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by Scratch (PM , CC ) on Saturday May 3, 2008 @ 2:51 PM


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

   
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